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Hi there ^^
As promised, not a speedpainting this time!
One can only write 'thank you for your fav/watch' in so many different ways, so I wanted to at least draw something more personal than my old 't4s' drawing^^
Here it is. Enjoy your weekend!^^
As promised, not a speedpainting this time!
One can only write 'thank you for your fav/watch' in so many different ways, so I wanted to at least draw something more personal than my old 't4s' drawing^^
Here it is. Enjoy your weekend!^^
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Thought I'd do the critique here since you have listed 'critiques wanted.'
Starting with the positives and growth Your shading has improved a lot. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> As noted earlier, you've got strong contrast. You've got a lot of detail and you've got a more dynamic pose.
On room for growth: The biggest problems with this are in the base structure of the drawing. She does not look balanced, too much weight being pushed forward considering where her legs are. She looks like she'll fall forward. Her arm in the foreground is deformed at where it joins the body and at the wrist. Her wrists are turned too far that they look broken. Her head should probably be pushed to the left a bit to feel natural on her body.
The quickest fix for this problem is to do character studies and just do 10 minute, 1 minute sketches of people for a while. You'll get a better eye for what looks natural and replicate it in your work much better. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Good luck! !